Hmm, that really gets me thinking. Oh I like the poem by the way. Now Im just sort of lost in my thoughts. The first stanza is great, the second one is good except the last line is a bit long, possibly shorten it to 'That we cant seem to see,' But thats just a suggestion and the last stanza is great but maybe cut out the 'is' I dont think its neccessary. But I really like it, as I said it got me thinking, and it takes a good poem to do that!

Great job... i liked it alot...

Doug i like this a lot- its really good. jesse