Coooool, Doug, I like your stuff. This is a cool poem I like how its a little description of rage, and I like the pictures you build up and the examples you use. You have a talent and I really like your poems. Write more! Do it now!

I loved this poem!! it was so good... how do u come up with that stuff.. its so amazing!! keep writing!!! comment and rate my poems too.
-danielle

Really good keep it up