Pour my heart out onto the floor

by Tripp   Mar 26, 2006


I wish i could show you how I feel

get down, clasp your hands, and kneel

for you pour my heart out onto the floor

tell you that I love you more

than you can ever imagine

It's my heart and soul that you're forever in

The time has come for me to try this

although I'm pretty sure that it's your heart it will miss

I hope it doesn't, I hope that that's impossible

I beg that my love for you is believable and possible

it's your love that I cling to every day

or else my hearts strings would begin to fray

throw me off into the endless abyss

without even one more kiss

from the one I love most

I would turn empty, turn into a ghost...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    U have such a grrt span of wording and ur rhyme sceme is unique in evry poem...i havent turned to the self-mutilation but i hav gotten low enough to...i am too much of a life-lover to commit....ur gf is VERY lucky to hav u...i am glad things are going strong still even after the myspace thing....ur a grrt writer and thx for ur ongoing comments,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I know i reda this a million tiems but i lvoe it adn umm I am 16 soon to be 17 and I have been writing poems ever since I was in like 2nd grade....maybe younger??? No clue but my serious stuff umm abotu 5 years I guess...all I know is that I want ot be a prof. writer and my bf thinks that I REALLY should to lol. So yea thats one of my dreams..also I aparently to him am an amaziing singer which i have been singing since i was like 3 so i wanna put out demos and makes cds at sum poin also i want ot model..what do u want to do?? jw jw

    by the way U ARE GODO DONT EVER SAY UR NOT..i lveo ur prospective...keep it up

    lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Brilliant. Fav lines:

    "I hope it doesn't, I hope that that's impossible

    I beg that my love for you is believable and possible"

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by mkml

    Beautiful, deep emotions and a great poem. 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    It's a good poem, very nice, emotional, well written. Keep it up. Thanks for the comment btw although the poem wasn't meant to rhyme...

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