Miscellaneous Thoughts

by Kenshin   Mar 26, 2006


Another day,
Betrayal coming through,
Changing lanes,
Doing nothing but harm,
Ever feel so lonely,
Feeling like no one cares
Gone like the wind,
Heaven is all we look for
I for one, am looking for it
Just like a little child in a quest of knowledge
Knowledge is power
Love is a weakness
Mine before yours
No one is perfect, that what I was told
Optimistic is nothing but weak escape
Pessimistic is nothing but being a realist
Quest to know the unknown
Racing the time
Sure, everything falls in the end
Time to say goodbye,
Utopia is waiting for me
Viewing it through the window of life
Waiting for another day to pass
Xenophobia attacking my closest friends
You are nothing but a child
Zealous of a new toy coming to him.

*EOP Challange*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Connie

    Very good - I really enjoyed this poem.

    Ever feel so lonely,
    Feeling like no one cares
    Gone like the wind,
    Heaven is all we look for
    I for one, am looking for it

    I really liked these words! Nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Well done! I found this type of poem to be somewhat challenging. You did a great job on it.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, i liked this..it was amazing...it really made me think...very deep...i especially liked the lines

    Optimistic is nothing but weak escape
    Pessimistic is nothing but being a realist
    Quest to know the unknown

    that is so true and real...great job! 5/5
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

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