Hey,
thats beautiful, but also sad.
i kinda know what its like.
luv emma
xox

Heya, I really really like this poem, it must be on of the best I have read in a while. It flows amazingly and all the rhyme is great, doesn't sound forced. Take care and well done,
- Polly

Ahhh babes u put so much emotion in to all ur poems dere so powerful and beautiful....i hearts it....can ya read some of mine...*blushes*

Soz 4 your loss hun, I no wat it is like to lose someone to suicide, just keep your chin up and keep writing, great poem 5/5 take care sarah x

Great job, each line was as intense as the next! Best poem I've read for a while.

Wow... amazing poem.. you really get the strong emotions out.. i almost cried.. very powerfull... 5/5

Oh baby, oh sweetie, no no no. It's not your fault, no no no no no! You are not responsible for what she does in her life, or what she did. As a friend you can do what you can, but in the end your friend did what she wanted to. She choose to do something wrong, something so wrong. I am sorry if I am offending her memory by talking about her this way, I am not meaning to. I just . . . I know you are still alive and I want you to stay that way. You have been to hell and back more times than I know, with your experiences you could help thousands while in turn healing yourself. Blaming yourself for her suicide does nothing except lie to yourself and make the hurt so much more. You cut yourself and she did too . . . Same thing will me and my boyfriend last year. You were both in a bad place, and you found support and safety with a friend who you felt excepted you, but that does not make you guilt of her death. My rambling might not mean anything to you, and I know I can't change your mind, but I can try to show you how the situation looks from my eyes. Please remain with us in this world.

-Tainted Mikochan

I no how u feel

Its sad hun but you cant blame yourself put it this way without you she probably would have died sooner. you made her last longer take care xxx

No no no hunni, this was not your fault. She made up her mind on her own, you didn't make her cut or commit suicide...It's wrong that you two cut your wrists together, sick in a way, but no matter what you could not have saved her, how could you, when you need help too??? You both needed some one (no a cutter) to see how far in you both were and how you needed help...Please don't feel guilty and we all need you here, don't end your life like she did...I know it must be tough for you, but hunni be strong please, I would do anything to make you stop blaming yourself and I would take your pain away if I could, I will so anything for you....You know I am always here for you babe, let me know if there is anything I can do. Hope you didn't get me wrong, I may have sounded harsh in the beginning, you have my support and love girl

Always here - Sabrina

Please, please dont be talking about you. if you are it is not ur fault!!!! this is extremely well written and everything goes very well together, it couldn't be iimproved at all...i liked it a whole bunch. 5/5. just please don't be blaming urself. i'm here if ya wannna talk.....t_s_layia@yahoo.com. lata honey. -Leah

I can't even express in words how much this poem has touched me. my best friend just recently committed suicide and your poem is exactly how every thing went with us. i do blame myself everyday. i miss her so much. i feel like i could have done so much to save her and now it's too late. That's a beautiful poem.
**~missnLogii~**
cAsSi3

Wow i've said poems were deep but this one really shows how much emotion and thought you have put into it.
I can't imagine what you must be going through but keep strong and keep writing your poems...I really mean it when i say i hope time can heal a broken wound.

That was an amazing poem, really heartfelt with emotion, the rhyming was great and did not feel forced at all. A beautifully written poem, but very sad.

This is such a sorrowful poem, beautifully written
I haven't come across a poet like you in a while, someone who writes from the heart
Keep writing =]

You have a lot of talent. And your poetry is beautiful - I'm just so sorry that it's all true. Excellent imagery. I really became lost in your poem.

Peace. [Sole]

Dont you blame yourself, now okay? everyone needs someone to make them feel like they are normal and have someone who hurts just like them. you guys both hurt and you both took the pain away by cutting so you stuck together because you were the same. you found each other in all hopelessness. she took it too far...dont you take it too far. this sounds clique and i know that you dont know me and i dont know you but every day is truly a gift from God and it would be great if you honored God, yourself, and the people who love you by getting up and over your pain and sucking up the hurt and geting through each day with your head high. Love yourself.
Always Listening,
Lindsey

Nice poem, 5.5

Great poem.....but it wasn't your fault, i feel the same way my bestfriend committed suicide too......hang in there.....

xoxo YOUR BIGGEST FAN

This is so good!