Omg no its not ur fault .. u can just tell some one not to cut when ur doing it to .. but thats really sad .. agreat poem ..

Excellent poem. Wonderful message too. Try to expand your rhyming words. ^-^. Keep it up

There are so many sadnesses on your life as it seems..and i'm so sorry about her death...don't ever give up living and hold on to life tightly...nonone know what tomorrow brings
And please smile for me...just once *tickles her*

Take care
Have a nice day
Laura

I was teary eyed.
"Such sweet silence of Death to be,
Of that spirit in sickness coming for me.
Shall I end it all on my own?
No, you helped me hold the knife...."
I know how you feel, my uncle too took his life into his own hands, and now my cousin is fatherless. e-mail me if you need to talk. lot's of luv!

-Liz-
~muahs to all~

Wow. omg your poems touch me. <333