by Void Mar 26, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
In this darkened cave, |
by Ike Dizzle
It's alright. I mean it's not what I was expecting but it's still good. Is there something we need to talk about? I'm always here if you need to talk. Just IM me. ANyway you poem gets a 4.9/5 |
by Darien
Doesn't need rhymes, its really good without them. |
by Tammie
Thats a great poem. i like poems that rhyme usually, but that was really deep and i loved it. keep up the good work 5/5 |
This is very good, I'm finding myself in a similar situation...because a lot of my poems are just feelings. BUT I liked this unique...yet scarily true...sometimes poetry is all the better free verse....you have clearly proven this...Brill... |
by Kaylee
To me, when poems don't rhyme, they feel more real and the last line just made me think about myself so much. Thanks for sharing. |