Comments : The Race

  • I Felt Those Same Emotions For Four Years, I Ran Track For The Better Part Of My Life, I Only Lost 1 Track Meet..Otherwise I'm On Top! I Love The Rush And The Feel Of Running And You've Captured Those Emotions Flawlessly In This Poem 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by mandieD

    I liked this poem. it said i wanted it and i got it.

    quite unlike life sometimes but it's nice wen it works out eh? lol

  • 18 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    The rhyming is great. Nothing seems forced. Great job 5/5

    - Thanks for reading my poem -

    ~ Tina

  • 18 years ago

    by LuvMeAlwayz

    Good poem