Despite the shortness of his poem, its great. the thing that isnt great is that you have to write about stuff like love lost. im sorry :(

Very true words, god I so relate to this, thank you for a very succinct poem, it doesn't need to be any longer to capture the essence of the feelings... I use too many words...
love and light

Good poem, yea love can be a bit hateful sometimes, a bit short but that is ok