Short but fantastic , great job, keep them coming take care hun sarah x

I thought i could submit my comment in Dutch because I'm from Belgium but obviously the site doesn't accept other languages. Anyhow, i love your poem, it has this kind of thing that i can't explain. But I really like it. I can read it over and over again. By the way, i share your opinion about -so called god- and the whole b*llsh*t about how great he is - and let's praise him - and on, and on..
I could go on for hours about my opinion but back to your poem, it's worth a 5/5.
Greets; Nathalie

[And I'm Not A Slave Of A God That Doesn't Exist]

Nice wording. Really cool poem.