Really good and interestng and it makes u think

Ooh I liked the twist on the last line from "she" to "you." I think you used some lovely and powerful descriptions that really painted an image in my mind. I found it a very touching write indeed. On the first line of the last stanza I think you're missing "were."
Well done, very well written.

Your poem paints such beautiful imagery, the 'glass road' its so sad! But I know just how the person in the poem feels, I would love to live in amongst nature, in peace :)

Peace. [Sole]

Thanks for commenting mine. =]

This poem was great. I like how you described everything. It really painted a picture in my mind and I could see what you were telling me.

Overall, I really liked it. Awesome job,
and keep writing so I have more to read.

Chelsey

WoW my imagination is going crazy lol i adored this poem espacially this :"Blue eyes sad like the ocean longing for the faith of the sea." i don't know why but that touched me the most! another great job :)

~StefQ

Thats really good. You used alot of good words to describe things. It sounded perfect! Loved it! 5/5

luv natalie x-x

P.s Sorry for the late comments, Ive been a bit busy lately.

"Dying inside without the light of flames igniting her world" and the last line really stuck out for me
Be as you are wow those words are really caught up in my mind now
Keep writing :D:D

Another great one I ahve to say, very creative, and the words you used were captivating, like a dreamer your poems are so imaginary, it's like you think of places, feelings and gracefully put them in wrods great job!

A great poem, thoughtfully written, with great description, with deep meaning aswell, great! Keep writing!!

Very touching. 5/5

and i will fix my "I's" in my poems
i just started writing.

Beautiful... Natural... Soft & sublte, yet you got your meaning across. Good use of imagery and techniques. Once again I'm blown away.
5/5 (again)
As always~ Kate

Not my type of poetry but I see where you're coming from.

Very good, I didn't see any problems, and I liked the message the last two lines really brought it together I think.

Again, great poem! I really like how you described how this person feels. I dunno if you're describing you or someone else from your point of view...either way, it was an awesome poem!

"Dying inside without the light of flames igniting her world.
Couldn’t see that girl who lived within her. Who they saw." ... I like how you worded that...good job, very touching 5/5

I liked this and it was very original nice imagery and description, really liked it xx ALLY xx

I loved how you described everything. Like "sun-kissed hair" & "pastel skin"

Oh I truly love this one...... always be who you are, don't be who you're not. Its ok to dream and to follow those dreams too as long as you do as you! Wonderful write..........

Great write

Beautiful word choice nice rythm

~GLASS~

WOW great job as usual all i can say is wow 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Another great write. I believe there is a lil girl like that inside all women.
Once again you have the amazing ability to portray how others may be feeling. Please checkout some of my favorites!