Great Job i loved your poem..
and I'm glad you go to church
Everyone Should Praise God
Great job
i loved it
your gettin better
5/5
~TPOMH~

This is great! you dont hear alot of people talking bout god cause they are afraid of what people will think about them. WELL DONE! i dont like it though as much as some of the other ones you have. but please keep writing.. i love coming home and reading new poems.

This is great! you dont hear alot of people talking bout god cause they are afraid of what people will think about them. WELL DONE! i dont like it though as much as some of the other ones you have. but please keep writing.. i love coming home and reading new poems.

You have a heart after The Lord... and your honest enough in this to tell everyone that, yeah, you still arent submitting everything to God, but at least you are aware that you should be doing so... and that awareness will help you.... to me it's not what style or form that someone writes in, it's the words and the honesty that they express in thier work..... and you just proved to be a perfect example of honesty in this.... thank u for being open and real... you made reading this a joy for me....
phil

This is so powerful! again im so glad to find another on here who is a follower such as myself. keep up the gr8 work!