by Tripp Mar 26, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
other
Wow, not sure where the hell this came from. i was just listening to music and before i knew it this had been written down...yeah. sorry about that crappy title, i couldn't think of anything else. so yes, please comment. criticism is good |
Wow not many gusy talk about friendship and its importance so i find this poem vrry refreshing...godo job keep it up. |
by Laura Ash
Great poem! 5/5 I loved that frist line |
I liked the title....lol..but you are an awesome poet and hav grrt words to use...i wish i could do that..nice plot and i hope to read more from you, |
by Sole
Great poetry - though you could find a better structure. I liked the meaning as well, and the title isn't all that bad :) |