My apology

OoOoo..short but sweet i give u a five and mean it! bravo! it kept perfect rhythem and has a bit of a bite to it as i like to put it. in the line
when i fall of the ledge
i'd edit it and make of OFF the ledge.
i'm a dork and catch these things...
well anyways i really did like this one. these r the kind of things that get very high ratings. now if u can make a longer one and pull off the rhyming perfectly like u did with this one then u would be getting very good. and as you can see in some of my poems i tend to break the rhythem but hey ppl still love them and u still read them. well c ya latter my most frequent reader.

I loveee this poem. i can relate to it soo much. great work. keep it up. and thanks for your comment :) love ya, tammie

I luv it, i luv it, i LOVE IT!!!!!!!! okay, so yeah, im still going out with dj. i luv him...luv ya hun, keep writing. Hey, should we see a movie or go to BC Sound on Saturday?
Luv Ya Lots
RayRay

A little rough at parts, but this thing is gushing emotion. whoever you wrote this for, i hope that it gets better in between you two soon.