So sad :( It was great to read, as the poem is beautiful, but such a sad ending. Lonlinessis is the worst feeling.

Peace. [Sole]

I liked this, and it is very sad. The last two lines got me, the emotions and pain were very vivid. I wasn't too sure of the meaning in the third stanza, why she needed to be born again. But good job.

Gr8 write.. once again.. i reli liked this poem too.. tho i liked the other one more.. its good and i liked ur words.. but i didnt understand wat the title has to do with the poem itself.. i mean, ur using different points of view.. (i and she) so...
but overall, its a good one
take care
NannO

Very emotional. Deep, but written beautifully.

Chelsey

So emotional and sad :( but so amazangly written! i really liked it , for a second i could feel the same :) excellent poem 5/5

~StefQ

This is good. I hope this poem wasn't based on how your feeling though. *hugs* It was a great poem 5/5 =]

luv natalie x-x

Wonderfully written and expressed peice

5/5

"Stranded on the
Edge of reason.
Knowing she could fall in a second"
Use of edges and holes - something I've done before - very effective
Love this idea of being reborn - sometimes I guess people just wish they could be
Well done =]

Great job, I love poems that i can relate to, and I related to this one, I too needed the explanation at the bottom to sort of understand better, but for the most part I got it, I enjoyed this poem. not other suggestions then to keep writing, I love reading your poems.

Amazing descriptive poem, I especially liked the stanza 'Stranded on the
Edge of reason.
Knowing she could fall in a second.'
I liked it because it put accross the point quite simply, but hard-hitting. Keep up the great work!

Again, it needs to be longer. i like the last sentence

Excellent! Amazing, as I dare!

This poem was great, I loved the imagery, I love the phoenix part, that showed you know something of myth.
Anyways I liked this one alot

Perfect. This is so good! I am sure you have gotten tired of hearing me say that...

BRILLIANT! I really love this part..

As a phoenix rises from
The ashes, she needed to be born again.

wow this is such an amzing point of view... wow I look forward to reading more of your poems there so beautiful.. Your a very talented writer!=)

--emotionless.19*

Oh .. that was such a great poem .. really sad though.. and im liking that you said she "was born again" a nice way to look at it!!

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Alot of us need to be reborn again, but we can't. So we stay where we are, because it is so familiar with us. Sometimes we can't deal with change, but change is good. Change makes us strong. And we need all the strength we can get.

So sad, but wonderfully written....good idea to put together a poetry book, it should b great!
jesxx

Great emotional and really nice.
i like the part with phoenix alot, really good work.

Wow, this poem is really touching. I completely understand the emotions and thoughts in this poem because I've actually been there before. Everything's better now, but this poem is really meaningful to me.

The flow is great and it's very well-written. 5/5

Thanks for all of your comments by the way. I appreciate them cause they've actually got some thought put into them, unlike other peoples comments.

Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
~Kelly~