by Sole Mar 26, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
In time I'll forget you |
by Tara Kay
It was good, it was nice and loving. |
by †Undone♥
This is so good. Um... not trying to criticize, but for the flow of the 2 and 3 stanza, maybe you sould put "I will" instead of "I'll"? |
Loved it, it flows nicely and really is the truth, and once again thank you |
Stop tugging at my heart strings already! |
by Alex Marlatt
This poem was also good, rhyme scheme good, and most importantly the words for the last two stanzas were dead perfect. Great job |