Great poem, I really liked the lines 'Why we told so many lies
To protect each other from the truth
' very true indeed.
Yet another great poem by Sole. Keep it up (You don't want to ruin your reputation) : )

Aww the sadness
:(
This is a really truthful poem

Nice poem. you really came trough.
keep up.

This poem was also good, rhyme scheme good, and most importantly the words for the last two stanzas were dead perfect. Great job

Stop tugging at my heart strings already!
You know your ace...I won't let you forget it....shove these in a book the world needs to know....how utterly talented you are.

[lostlaureate - come find me]

p.s I hope you don't run out of time....

Loved it, it flows nicely and really is the truth, and once again thank you

This is so good. Um... not trying to criticize, but for the flow of the 2 and 3 stanza, maybe you sould put "I will" instead of "I'll"?

It was good, it was nice and loving.
xxxx