Good poem. Definitely brings back memories for me of stuff I went through, I'm pretty sure we've all got pain from people we loved. 5/5, and thanks for all the helpful comments on mine :)

The reaon I liked this one was it didn't seem cliche. It did rhyme but it was done ina way that it kept me reading instead of asking when it was over. I don't know how the speaker of the poem feels exactly but I can relate to it a bit. Either way, I wish I could write a love poem or even if it's not really a love poem like this one :)

Yet another great poem from - Sole - I've run out of great things to say about your poems.

MOre face imagery
You are raher good at it =]
(Last line that is)

Good poem, I liked your use of vocab, many people don't know what sublime is, also goo rhyme scheme

I absolutely love it! You can feel your emotions so well....

"You stabbed my heart and made a tear
You hung me from the tattered rope
You went to hell and I followed you there
And now I've lost all hope"

those lines are amazing, my heart just sank when I read them and made me feel what you were/are going through.

definitely a beautiful write...5/5!

thanks for commenting on my poem too!

5/5 I loved your choice of words

Wow that was great I know how you feel, and thank you for the comment i'm always looking for ways to improve.

Aww, it is perfect, i loved it, i loved it alot and it was so nice to read. xxx