Too Good To Be True

by Mezmeryz   Mar 26, 2006


I thought wed be forever friends
Wouldnt end with any twist in fate
Wed have our path in destiny straight
And wed keep it going no ends

Around for each other wed always be
Id be there for you, and you for me
Every struggle, together wed see
Love for each other, living it free

Friends wed be from beginning till end
Towards each other our hands would extend
Any problems, together wed mend
Thoughts and choices would always blend
All the time, as one wed spend
Together wed live through every trend
When in pain wed never pretend
Upon each other wed forever depend

But I knew it was too good to be true
We share problems very few
Of how I feel you havent a clue
And were no longer one, but two
Away from each other weve slowly drew
And all our problems gradually brew
So much has happened, no longer a crew
Together we didnt even live it through

Forever friends we no longer are
Were not so close, but very far
Upon my heart youve left a scar
Thoughts just seem to run bizarre

I thought wed be forever friends
Wouldnt end with any twist in fate
Wed keep our path in destiny straight
And wed keep it going no ends

Too good to be true.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    It was really beautiful but honestly the wed instead of we'd did get a little bit annoying after a while. Don't mind me though I just prefer the actual word. I did like the title and the poem in itself. One of the better friendship poems. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Great job 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Lucy Loves Not

    I like this poem....your rhyme scheme is constant....perhaps, somewhat over-bearing, but the message was strong and powerful.

  • 18 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    Hey hun
    dis is brilliant i red it wen u rte it bt neva had da tym 2comment but i told u its class n u cdnt get da feelngs any closa 2reality....al in al its jus totaly n utterly brill!

  • 18 years ago

    by suppressed

    Awsome poem i have been there i know what its like. you are talented check out some of my poems if ya can
    xx take care