by Mezmeryz Mar 26, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
I thought wed be forever friends |
by Kaylee
It was really beautiful but honestly the wed instead of we'd did get a little bit annoying after a while. Don't mind me though I just prefer the actual word. I did like the title and the poem in itself. One of the better friendship poems. 5/5 |
by Fallen~Tears
Great job 5/5 |
I like this poem....your rhyme scheme is constant....perhaps, somewhat over-bearing, but the message was strong and powerful. |
Hey hun |
by suppressed
Awsome poem i have been there i know what its like. you are talented check out some of my poems if ya can |