Awsome poem i have been there i know what its like. you are talented check out some of my poems if ya can
xx take care

Hey hun
dis is brilliant i red it wen u rte it bt neva had da tym 2comment but i told u its class n u cdnt get da feelngs any closa 2reality....al in al its jus totaly n utterly brill!

I like this poem....your rhyme scheme is constant....perhaps, somewhat over-bearing, but the message was strong and powerful.

Great job 5/5

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~!*Meaghen~!*

It was really beautiful but honestly the wed instead of we'd did get a little bit annoying after a while. Don't mind me though I just prefer the actual word. I did like the title and the poem in itself. One of the better friendship poems. 5/5