Hmm. I like this poem. The flow was really good and the format was good except for one stanza:

love no longer lingers in the night air surrounding me,
hate has overpowered all.
Im slipping into darkness,
Please catch me before i fall.

"love no longer lingers in the night air "

I think that line is too long and breaks off from the flow a little.

Other than that, great job.

That was sweet...nice poem...keep writing...
love ya lots,
sore

That was sweet...nice poem...keep writing...
love ya lots,
sore

Not bad chick.....i need to check up on your other ones i missed while i took a break....dont stop writing...talk to you laterz
~matt~

Gd