Great poem and flow up until this stanza

"I simulate life because
of my fear Afraid
to have anyone
a little too near"

The rhythm is shaken and maybe should be revised. Other than that it was beautifully written.

You're absolutely right I actually meant to Change that and I did. Thanx for the comment!

Love the very matter-of-fact style this poem is written in. the emotions are all there, but they are so subtly conveyed.

nice work
love and peace
shobhana