Truth

by Christy Trenholm Schmall   Mar 26, 2006


Accept me as I
Am I'm really
not that bad

Sometimes I just
don't get What
I never had

Take me at my
words For true
They'll always be

Even if that
Truth hurts both
you and me

If your life ain't
honest Then it
just ain't real

Life's hard enough
you see without
saccharin sweet surreal

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Simple, truthful and well written with a directness and nice flow.
    All the very best
    Ben

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Nice one Christy. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    A very introspective piece, Christy, and very well done.It really says so much about you.Just a suggestion, but I would switch the 'ain'ts' to 'isn'ts' for a better flow. and though the last line is excellent, it don't sem to fit with the rest of the stanza/piece.That said it is a very personal piece yet also says so much truth about life.

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Good one Christy! simple, truthful and well written.

    it's going to take me a while to read all your new posts!! looking forward to reading them all - it will be some time well spent!!

    love and peace
    shobhana

Read All Comments (4)

More Poems By Christy Trenholm Schmall