Comments : Truth

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Good one Christy! simple, truthful and well written.

    it's going to take me a while to read all your new posts!! looking forward to reading them all - it will be some time well spent!!

    love and peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    A very introspective piece, Christy, and very well done.It really says so much about you.Just a suggestion, but I would switch the 'ain'ts' to 'isn'ts' for a better flow. and though the last line is excellent, it don't sem to fit with the rest of the stanza/piece.That said it is a very personal piece yet also says so much truth about life.

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Nice one Christy. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Simple, truthful and well written with a directness and nice flow.
    All the very best
    Ben