by Monique Mar 27, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
**I wrote this with a friend of mine (male) so its written in the guys point of view. A romantic guy.. not just any guy could come up with this, haha.** |
by Milton
Great! I feel the same way. Good stuff. ;) |
by Jon Hunt
Wow very nice, as above very romantic and full of emotion, and also someone above said it didnt flow in places...but when does love or life ever flow well...i think it shows alot of feelings very nicely!! |
by PURE HEART
Nice write....very romantic,,,,both of u did a gr8 job..5/5 |
by BrokenToy
It's a really good poem. There are some places I feel like it's a bit hard to read, but maybe it's just me. Even so, it's well written and I like it alot. ^_^ *5* |