Comments : Tired of This

  • 18 years ago

    by Milton

    I've been feeling the same way. I've slot some as well. It was a hard process just keeping it on hold, and then for her to leave at the end, after everything we've done together. Is just too much.. Long story but that's just the summary.. Anyway, I enjoyed this peice. I sort of feel the same way. Good stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    I really like the way you articulated your feelings with seeming precision and a good flow. Your writing appears controlled yet it is filled with difficult emotions. Clever :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    Great poem! 5/5 It was really deep

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Loved it 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*