Comments : I Want You With Me Forever

  • 18 years ago

    by mike

    Your work is alright i guess,but i want you to also check out my great work and leave me a truthful comment is that clear and dont you dare candy coat it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    A great write... Written from the heart. Your emotions clear and concise. Enjoyable read!! Glad it was a good ending :)

  • 18 years ago

    by AinsleySara

    Hee hee i love it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by AinsleySara

    Hey you just checking this site out again wow i remember those days... and maybe things were ment to be between us i will never know... and maybe i'm just afraid to ever find out...but i know i loved you and i know i decived you and cheated on you and lied to you... but you always seemed to love me and maybe this was supposed to happen and maybe i wasn't supposed to do the things i did and didn't do... but all i know now is that I'm not yours anymore and thats the way things are ment to be...
    ainz