You took my life
you were all i had
you left me dead
how could u be leaving
me right there dying
you couldn't save me
what did i do wrong
to make you mad
to make me dead
to kill yourself
on that shelf
there is no me
there is no you
there is no we.
I like it. its very good. i gave u a 5/5
u do have talent and i like ur poems.. so keep on writing so i can keep reading htem. great poem i love it
take care
luve angie