That....is really odd. It has a very mysterious air to it (and I know thats the intention) and also the structure illudes me. It sort of has no structure and that really adds to the descpription of the fog. If this makes sense its sort of like a picture poem where they write the poem in the shape of the topic, except in this case its the structure... Ok Im making no sense aaaaannnddd post.

I loved the description, a very haunting feel. I've lived here (NL) my life and there are so many legends and deaths caused by the fog. Amazing poem, you captured its elusive nature beautifully!

Woah... Chilling write! What a great poem... Original and descriptive. Enjoyable, educating read :)

Wow, this is awesome! So haunting and eerie, love the subject! Excellent poem!