I love this.. I know for you feel.. I feel the same way for my boy.

This is a really great poem!!!! I loved it! Great job!

Nice job it's sweet. 5/5
-Vino

This is a sexy sexy and i love you and ur poems ur in ma faves=p

love Dean xoxoxo

That's pretty!

Very simplistic, which isn't a bad thing, gets the point across well - you obviously love him loads!
You could try some imagery in a poem like this, I know it was a quick one but you could make it even deeper :)
Still a good job though - keep writing =]

It was pretty good for a quick poem. I liked it. 5/5
-Vino

Very sweet...good job

5/5

Hey this is really cute. better then you think.. keep it up
dee

Another good one peanut

Ohh I see here's the love. ;]

Oh dear me. This poem was not very strong in my opinion, it had a rather weak structure (missing puntuation, etc.) and the rhyming was very common and not very creative. You had plenty of emotion though, which is good. I must say, the thing that bothers me the most in writing is bad grammar. You REPEATEDLY made the mistake between "your" and "you're".

Actually,this is one of my favorites.
but one thing...in the 4th section it says "
i dont know what I'll do" well i think it would sound better "I dont know what I'd do" but thats just my opinion. other than that,wonderful poem!

I like it. my style is pretty similar to yours. keep it up

WOW , so lovely poem
Biya

I like it.. it is very sweet