Wow! This is awesome! There's so much about this poem that I found to be amazing...
The opening lines set the perfect mood for this piece, dazzling!
Perfect flow, flawless imagery....I swear I could feel the heat of the flames as I read this!
Awesome stuff! Take care and keep it up~Holly

I loove your vocabulary, it makes me happy :-)

How can you be such a fantastic poet, yet not be dead? Hmm? Most good poets are dead, are they not? But gods, what incredible poetry this is!

^.^ As always, privileged to have a chance to read your work.

Peace, love and empathy.