Comments : Breathing closer to the end. ( short )

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Reminds me of the day when even i used to look at my fag and just make poetry abt it, nice to have those feelings back again.

    very nicely xpressed, great poem indeed

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Very well expressed. I'm amazed. Keep it up.