Threatning, Dangerous, Terrifying

I love how you wrote this too. Describing something then writing "Threatening, Dangerous, Terrifying"

WOW
This poem rocked, the use of repetition of those three powerful words, awesome =]

You have a unique style of writing, I like it, the repetition of 'Threatening, Dangerous, Terrifying' created great suspense, keep up the great work : )

Repetitive, but well suited. You could go further with this subject however, what you've done is superb! =) Well done, I'm looking forward to getting to see more of your work.

Bt, I'm here to welcome you to the fish bowl, I'm Jenn the head of the bowl, Fighter and >tornapart are your assistants. If you need anything let us know. A few things I ask of everyone a) you read the welcome message and b) you fallow the rule of the site and club. Thankyou and *smiles* Welcome! I hope to make you feel at home love

Jenn

This peice is very good, it has a stroong rhythm to it and the repitition really adds to the overall peice rather then distracting from it (which is often the case).

5/5