This peice is very good, it has a stroong rhythm to it and the repitition really adds to the overall peice rather then distracting from it (which is often the case). |
by Pure Silence
Repetitive, but well suited. You could go further with this subject however, what you've done is superb! =) Well done, I'm looking forward to getting to see more of your work. |
by Jenny
You have a unique style of writing, I like it, the repetition of 'Threatening, Dangerous, Terrifying' created great suspense, keep up the great work : ) |
by azlan26
WOW |
by Laura Ash
I love how you wrote this too. Describing something then writing "Threatening, Dangerous, Terrifying" |