Save Me

by Hannah Tiernan   Mar 27, 2006


Blood runs down my arm
tears fall from my eyes
my soul is turning black
my mind tells only lies

my terrored thoughts are getting stronger
the knife is in my hand
I want this horrible pain to end
so my feet will finally touch land

I do not want to live
please just let me die
why do i have to suffer
why should I constantly cry

Give me one good reason
why you want me to stay
show me that you care for me
help me believe the things you say

Take me from this suffering
if you must, use my beloved knife
save me from my greatest fear
save me from my life

**Plz rate and comment, these are my true feelings**

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  • 18 years ago

    by SyntheticDarknss

    I love your poem. You just have to remember that when things are really bad, they can only get better so keep ya head up and don't worry because time heals everything love.

  • 18 years ago

    by anonymous

    Oh honey, stray strong!!
    DO NOT GIVE UP!!
    when ever you feel the urge, write a poem, keep your hands busy!!
    do not go down that path!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sara

    Wow...this is really good. but you need to stay strong.. because i know things probably suck right now but things will get better. believe me, they will. and if you wanna talk to someone you can e-mail me anytime. Awesome poem tho! i love it