Good job! I really like it :)

Great poem, def 5/5 keep writing and take care hun sarah x

Heyy missed ur poems
this was really amazing!!!! well written, beautifully expressed. I loved the last stanza. you are the best ;)
Much Luv
NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

O sweet sister!!! he is listening..and he is responding....but u gotta remember, God doesnt belive in time...so it just takes time to see the outcome. trust me, he wil help u! he, nor i, will let u cut ur wrist too death!!!!!! i cant live w/out a big sis ;)
this poem was really amazing!!!!! LoVeD it!!!!!!
5/5 acorss ;)
stay strong sweet heart....u r not weak, u can drop the blade...trust me, u can!!
ur sis

Beautiful.I love it...you shouldn't do it though...stay strong....-xxx-

Personally myself I am not a Christian, but I liked the message. The rhyming was all good and I didn't see any mistakes. Take care.

You always manage to amaze me with your poems. This was amazing. I can really relate to it. Everything flowed together perfectly. Great job Sabrina 5/5

- Thanks for reading my poems -

Much love
~ Tina

Awww wow 5/5

Aww such a ...pretty poem, i no that seems a wierd word to use, but it was beutiful, i love your poetry! i kind of hav a poem like it! 5/5 jesxx

This started out really well as a prayer but it turned "suicidal" in the middle and lost its impact...just didn't do it for me...but still it looks as if much time and consideration was put into it.

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Good rhyming in this peice, very smooth and unforced. the structure in general is god and the flow smooth. the content does not have the same power as some of your other peices, but still holds a lot of emotion and thought.

5/5

btw in the 4th stanza i think the word "hole" shouls maybe be "hold"

Amazing job.. This is so sad though... I hope you're okay =) I loved the rhyming scheme, it flowed perfectly and I mean literally perfectly lol.. Very well thought out and emotional... I have always thought poems written out of experience stood out and I can say the same for yours. Awesome job!

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