Comments : Most Sweet!!! (Sonnet)

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Superb! Such a sweet & romantic piece. Its a blessing to find a love like this. Hold on to it. Wonderful job as usual, loved every bit of it.

    Best Wishes Always
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Wow a great use 0f w0rdz in this. beautifully written. a heartfelt piece. great j0b darl! =]

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    So romantic ^_^ Beautiful and full of love, amazing! (Your mastery of this form is incredible!)

  • 18 years ago

    by tara

    Great sonnet! very unique and romantic!

  • Robert, how lovely penned once again you've done here, just beautiful, as your words whisper...anyway, thanks for your beautiful comment, much appreciated. take care.

    "In you there is a love that brings to being
    Such beauty as you cannot hope to see,
    Too simple and too glorious for seeing,
    Making it a sacrament to be.
    As love gives wings their will and words their song,
    So may it give to you days sweet and long."

    love,
    gloria's glen.

  • 18 years ago

    by Catherine

    It was nice, but, honestly, what does it mean by ~A Shakespear Sonnet~ Does that mean it was written by Shakespear, or that it was inspired by Shakespear...

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Its nice. the only thing is that you have soo many commas that kind of take away from the poem. well thats the way i feel anyway

  • 18 years ago

    by Atahan Tolunay

    Very well written. It's perfect. I hope to read sonnets that are about other things then love in the future too though. Keep it coming, I myself am trying to improve my sonnet writing at the moment. *Adding to friends*