X Pointless.

by Sole   Mar 27, 2006


It's only a small sacrifice
To save our diseased world
Just a few more animals will die

It's all for the scientific
Technology, and human health
Just a few more animals
Will die

Imagine a world, without disease
No ill-health or sickness
Just a few more animals
Will die

But the question is, does it work?
And how many is 'Just a few'?
How many more animals
Will die?

Before the human race is happy
And vivisection is completely banned
So many more animals
Will die

Pointlessly.
Hopelessly.
Helplessly.
Unjustified.
So many more animals
Will die.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Its good, strong throughout and good use of repetition
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    "Pointlessly.
    Hopelessly.
    Helplessly.
    Unjustified.
    So many more animals
    Will die. "

    Strong finish...I totally dig this one.

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Brigitte

    I agree completely with your point of view here... Nice job on stressing such a major point in outstanding words!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jonathan

    Nice. you've really nailed the "common" worlds oppinion about our lifestyle.
    very good 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    Aww the sadness
    Loved the repition of die
    Im writing one now

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