My god this is deep
Oh dear
But extrememly good =]

I loved the imagery you've painted with this...

Very good poem. I really like the flow.
Good job.

Strong imagery. Everything really penetrates my soul....painfully so...the nightmares are lifelike...I cannot get my head around how you manage this with words so well....I'm not just saying this...but this...this is good.

[lostlaureate - come find me]

"Flicking through the pages of nightmares
Watching the clock of dreams tick by"
That is a good technique that indicates importance, not many people use it. Everything was good.

Imaginative, and deep and well written.
loved it
xxx

Great job!! I love the ending!!
-Winged devils rest who once did fly-
I've never thought about nightmares like that before!! Great work!! 5/5

Wow. This was great! You've done a wonderful job on this piece.

"A sorrowful movie, the pain of night
Drunken humour tells a lie
And sets to rest the nightmare-weavers
As the grasp of fate does slowly die"

-- In the last line, I think it should be reworded, to be frank. Something like.. "As the grasp of fate slowly dies". Just my personal opiniion, though.

Five out of five.

``Briana

Good Poem... Really :)
Keep up this good work :)

5/5. Very, very well done... I enjoyed the diction, the rhythm, the construction of the lines. These poems are why you're on my favorites list.

Two things: consider changing "sorrowful" in line 9 to something less... overdramatic isn't exactly the word, but it's close. Secondly, "winged devils" shouldn't have an apostrophe since it's plural, not possessive.

Nevertheless, excellent work. One question: Why the X's at the beginnings of the titles?