X Another Riddle

by Sole   Mar 27, 2006


I hate the modern world
The boats and fumey planes
Which pollute my water
And cause me so much pain

And like you try to kill me
I will destroy those
Who try to defy me,
Try to escape my throws

But they will suffer
In my equilateral hate
They can try to avoid me
But they cannot avoid fate

What am I?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Minkus

    4/5. Good but the rhythm could be better. Interesting riddle... perhaps the ocean? Or Mother Earth?

    If you comment back, I'd appreciate comments on any of my poems that don't yet have any.

  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Hm. I liked this. I'm not very good at riddles, though. So, I have no idea what the answer could possibly be. Hm..

    In the third stanza, I dislike the repetition of "avoid". Meh. Not a huge deal or anything, just a personal thing.
    :]

    Five out of five.

    ``Briana

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I like the idea of a riddle and it flows well too. I am guessing the ocean?
    whatever it is still a good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Interesting, yes. Different, yes. Good, absolutely. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Interesting. never seen a riddle on here. but nice. of course i have no idea. ocean or earth maybe. nice job!

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