Omg, u have no idea how much i love that poem 5/5 xxxdeaths angelxxx

This is an awesome poem

Very nice poem! I love the repeating stanza, it adds to the sense of helplessness you are showing in this.

Just a few suggestions:
1. in the repeating stanza: throught should be through
2. I kind of like the repeating "I see" but you shold try to keep it to only once in a stanza. If you have too many "I's" it take the focus off the broken souls and puts it on you.
-for example, your reating stanza could be:
I see the pouring rain
Another poor soul cries
Wallpwing in their pain
Seeing though their eyes

Very nice poem though! I thoroughly enjoyed it.

~Ann

Yea u got me to read this earlier bla de bla yea go ur poetry w00t etc the like

Another very good sad poem by sole.

This poem was pretty good. The message was good the rhyming was good some of the lines needed to be a little longer and fourth line it should be "through" not "throught"

Wow…. Wow… Wow…Wow…Wow! Did I say Wow? You are an absolutely, magnificent poet! Every piece you write just leaves me in a state of shock! This poem flowed perfectly I didn’t stumble on any of the words at all! Not to mention the topic of the poem was so deep and intellectual! I love how you make your poems very deep but also very simple and meaningful!

I Loved Once Again The Word Usage, I Admire The Repetition Of a Very Talanted Stanza, I Can't Believe I've Never Noticed You Before 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Wow. this is so sad. i lvoe how you repeated it and made it all work well tgohether. i felt so sad as the poem progressed through. it had so much emotion. this is FOR SURE my favourite of your writes. you are so talented. keep it up.

Kat

Oh, its so sad, it was full of emotion and captured me from the start
xxxxx