He doesent even care

by tormented   Mar 27, 2006


He doesent even,
that i contimplate cutting my wrist,
he doesent even care,
when he's not with me i feel this,
he doesent even care that im all alone,
he doesent even care that he leaves me in a deserted home,
he doesent take the time out,
to makesure im ok,
instead he shakes his head,
and slowly walks away,
he doesent even care that i cry at night,
with all the stress im under,
i wonder if im alright,
its like he cannot see,
that im so upset,
why, and how,
are always under my breath,
i guess it doesent matter,
if he doesent care then neither do i,
why do i care anyways?
it doesent matter what i feel,
i freak out over nothing?
but to me, its so big,
iv been like this all my life,
so why be happy now,
so here,
il smile for you,
paint my ugly face,
and you can stair at my mask,
the veryone i displace,
because it just doesent matter,
and i really dont care,
its really not so bad,
il just go back to pretending im not here!

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  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    The poem is wonderful...
    though...
    isn't it "doesn't"? (no english native speaker, can't be sure...)

    now, without the spelling questions...

    the poem is beautifully written and easy to relate to...(for me)
    the flow is very nice and the message is very well expressed...
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 18 years ago

    by tormented

    Hey please tell me what you think of my poems, i love to read comments...i love to hear what you think.