Comments : He doesent even care

  • 18 years ago

    by tormented

    Hey please tell me what you think of my poems, i love to read comments...i love to hear what you think.

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    The poem is wonderful...
    though...
    isn't it "doesn't"? (no english native speaker, can't be sure...)

    now, without the spelling questions...

    the poem is beautifully written and easy to relate to...(for me)
    the flow is very nice and the message is very well expressed...
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*