Don't ever say you don't want to be commented on again!! No matter how long or short it took you to write this poem, it came out of your head, and you wrote it down,. That is a talent that you have, and we thank you for that. None of my stuff took over 30 mins to write,(so THATS why its crap),
and most of it was about 15-=20 mins.
the poem was good.