by Dark Kitten Mar 27, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
What was to become of me?.... |
by Kaitlyn
Thats so sad,yet amazing. your poetry is just purely amazing. you have such talent. the structure wasgreat itself. |
by Moose
Wow this was amazing. Such beautiful flow and it wasnt disrupted anywhere. I dont see how I could give this anything but a 5. Great Job |
by Kaylee
I didn't get part of it because I think it said he and then she. But nevertheless it was haunting which means you have a wonderful sad poem here. decent structure, great word choice, good organization. Imagery was fantastic and deep. |
by Fallen~Tears
Oh my gosh .. its so sad.. but i loved it your so talented ... keep it up |
by amber
It is really good i like it you are so talented |