Such a sad and despairing poem - reminds me of one of my friends poems which is excellent like this one
The use of . . . . at the end really helped emphasise the suffering, as if you were cryiing

It is really good i like it you are so talented

Oh my gosh .. its so sad.. but i loved it your so talented ... keep it up

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

I didn't get part of it because I think it said he and then she. But nevertheless it was haunting which means you have a wonderful sad poem here. decent structure, great word choice, good organization. Imagery was fantastic and deep.

Wow this was amazing. Such beautiful flow and it wasnt disrupted anywhere. I dont see how I could give this anything but a 5. Great Job

Thats so sad,yet amazing. your poetry is just purely amazing. you have such talent. the structure wasgreat itself.