I loved the repeated stanza killing me inside" oh I'm lost for words I loveed that bit
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I like it keep it up

Nice work.. the more i read from you the greater you become.. keep it up

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~!*Meaghen~!*

Beautiful. I mean normally the repetition would be bad but you managed to pull it off so well. I really am amazed and it would be a wonderful song.

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L I loved it. Great poem. I bet this would make a great song also. You should look more into that, id listen to it.

Ummm...I don't understand the last stanza...or your comment. So I'm going to go read it again. But the way you put the words together, it sounded very pretty! lol, I'm kinda out of it right now. So ignore whatever I say that sounds retarded. Still, good poem, even if I don't know what it means.