Still so much love

by emmaroo   Mar 27, 2006


He grabbed her hand as they lay on the land

i want to be with you for life he told her looking deep into her eyes
but something terrible happened to his surprise

her face paused as she shook her head
"please no he said "

she walked away
as he just stayed there where she previously lay

tears fell from his eyes
he jolted up and shouted from far "so was it all lies!"

she turned around
staring to the ground

she replied" no i..i just dont love you anymore
he stuttered "but you swore"

she gathered her stuff and walked out of sight
this time he knew it would never be alright

everything finished so soon and fast all that he had to remember was their loved up past

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  • 18 years ago

    by emmaroo

    Thankyou for all comment but i have left my previous club as they wasent really my thing, to bothered about spelling rather than what the poem was actually saying x

  • 18 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    That was good. A nice little story.

    You could break it into lines and stanzas, though, to help with the flow.

  • 18 years ago

    by elmozbabiigurl7

    Aw it cute an sad

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is really good.

    Mallori