The title is fine my dear, I really love your choice of words, it flowed beautifully. please keep writing new, intersting styles of prose, I cannot get enough. Love, Tim

Wow, this is awesome! Your choice of words, simply amazing and the flow was perfection. Absolutely LOVE the last line, incredible poem! Love this form from you, you make it look so easy...
Oh and I like the title, too! :)

The title works well. Satin's does too, nevertheless, it's an amazing poem, just like you :]

Holly, the title is great, beautiful penned you've done as how you write them, and thanks for your beautiful comment btw, much appreciated, take care.

love
♥gloria˚s~glen♥

You never cease to amaze me. I am always looking forward to reading what ever you put your mind to writing. I remember when you wrote only love poems. 4 lines to the stanza. 2nd and 4th line rhyming. You have really grown in your talent. Keep up the great work. love ya.

Holly, after reading a variety of your work, i am really growing short of words to say how much your talent impresses me.

this one is remarkable, simply because it's emotions are just too powerful to ignore.

well done, do keep writing.

love and peace
shobhana