Notice me..

by Luke   Mar 27, 2006


It Hurts to see..
What i fail to be..
It hurts so bad..
Makes me soo sad..

If i changes my way..
Showed you each day..
I could be the same..
And let you play that game..

As all them boys..
That you treat like toys..
That i give my envy..
Just for you to notice me..

I\'m being obsurd..
But i want to be heard..
I want you to fall..
In love at my call..

© of Luke 27th March 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by tomuchhurt

    WOW!!! luke! first i have to say bravo!!! this is an amazing poem. my boyfriends name is luke and i fall in love at his call all the time. he's amazing but this is a great poem! i love it! 5/5
    Love: ANgelita
    come check out some of mine!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylalala

    Another good 1!! 5/5
    xxKaylaXX

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    ^_^ I love your writing Luke!!!! If I don't comment on every poem know that I at least read and love them :) Keep smiling, keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bogie

    Dang!!! Dude, you took me back to high
    school trying to get a girl to notice me by
    hang with guys she liked. Thank you for
    sharing this most excellent read indeed. Great job and Write On,
    Bogie

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Damn... A good flow, a nice piece! That desire to be noticed by that one that shakes your heart. Beautifully written Luke :)

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